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Making of episode 21
With this making-of, I propose you to enter in the backstage of the production of my most ambitious episode. I'm doing my best to build for this episode a funny and epic experience. It's also probably one of the rare report about the experience of a collaborative comic production, open-source, with contributors. I'll keep updating this document for my patrons Heroes as weekly bonus. When the document will be complete, and episode will be release; I'll publicly share this article.
a. Brainstorming on IRC and FramapadThe first ideas were written around October 2016 with experimenting a new way to write the story; I setup this collaborative online pad to collect all the ideas sent by contributors over Pepper&Carrot IRC channel. We quickly collected this way a very large amount of ideas, not only for episode 21, but also for 22 and 23. This content is rich, but too rich: good concepts but not cut for comics and with missing ending or story arc. Anyway: starting with all this richness is fun. The difficulties is to remove a large part and keep only elements that will improves the story of the episode.
Contributions by Nartance, Cmaloney, Valvin, Quiralta and Talime.
b. Concept-artAfter the release of the episode 20 ( the one with the donkey and unicorns ) the 17 December 2016, I started to do sketches with all the ideas I liked from the brainstorming during Christmas holidays. Here is a sample of sketches :
I like the confident one of Shichimi.
c. Scenario:Back after the holidays artwork , 2017 happy new year artwork , and test for GMIC smart-colorize, I started to write the scenario of episode 21 in Ghostwriter, using markdown and sync over the github peppercarrot_scenario repository to keep in interaction with the contributors on the IRC channel. I wrote dialog in french to not be limited by my poor English grammar and vocabulary ( dialogs were translated approximately with my skill just under in english ). With this version in English, I could get key feedback from the contributors to improve the story.
Ghostwriter markdown editor in action
d. StoryboardI started to create the storyboard in Krita. With this visual feedback, the story kept evolving and grew to over 30 panels and 7 pages. Its a lot! The pages were all refactored over 3 to 5 time for each one of them. Sometime to compact or make the storytelling more fluid. Sometime just to keep a good variety of shot and pleasant overall composition. Here is a sample of three revisions done over the page three.
e. Cleaning and letteringWhen the storyboard was final, I moved to format all the pages into two differents files: a SVG vector file ( using Inkscape ) for the speechbubbles and the dialogs, sound FX ; and a raster layered KRA file ( using Krita ) for the artworks. This will allow Pepper&Carrot to be translated, and with 38 languages available, it's a really important step.
That's why I need a solid storyboard on Pepper&Carrot, because after this step I'm not working anymore with a WYSIWYG feedback. And that's where the renderfarm script start to 'compile' for me the vector layer and the graphics. All needs to be carefully planed. This cleaning step took me long: this episode as a lot of text and soundFX. pushed in french on a dedicated repository on Github. Then Nartance and Valvin joined me to refactor the dialogs and Nartance pushed the change to the repository. Now the production can start.
The bottom of the page three, with vector panels and speechballoon.
Graphism are still the crappy storyboard sketches.
a. 3D models
While drawing the storyboard I quickly saw the main challenge of this episode will be to paint the background of the panel. A giant arena; many witches, a crowd, Komona city in background too... So I started to design a low quality model of the arena in Blender 3D, a speedmodeling done in less than a day production. 3D models helps to solve spatial issue with shot, and also helps to keep lighting consistent. While I was also enjoying time with Blender, I decided to do the bedroom of Pepper too, to solve a complex shot on the page 1. You can find all the *.blend files on the sources already. I used the plugin BLAM to setup the camera angle to be as close as possible to my sketches in the storyboard.
Thanks to Blender, I could realize the oval shape for the arena was better to create epic shot.
Second update: style research
Before starting the production of the pages, I thought it was a good idea to do research for the style. With the new filter GMIC 'Smart-Coloring' , I was really tempted to switch to pure black-and-white inking, so I started to test a workflows. This test was the one I felt confident with ; you can find scribbled around the pictures all my recipe notes and steps to reproduce this style.
A test over the first page
But this technique was new to me and I wasn't 100% sure. So I decided to be wise and redo the test over the page one only. This way, I can have a real feedback about this new style, without starting the first steps over all the seven pages, week after week, without really knowing where I'm going. Here is the storyboard of the page one:
Here is a light pass of pencil , just the necessary to get landmarks and guides to ink with clean lines over it.
... And here is the inking in itself. I was pretty happy about the brush preset I found to make good line variation while keeping clean edges. Inking this way ( over the pencil turned to blue ) is fast: the amount of lines is minimal.
... And a close-up at 100% of the viewport ( real pixel size ) :
Smart-coloring filter, and steps
The workflow was quick and felt logical, almost industrial: (from top-left to bottom-right) blue pencil, inking , GMIC smart coloring-filter, replacing color areas, shading areas, post-production glow on top.
For the background: Blender+Krita paint-over
For the 3D rendering done in Blender ; I made a simple rendering of the panel.
To break the 3D aspect and turn it into a painting, I painted directly over the image. It's long, especially to smooth all the edges and adding painterly effect.
Composing elements... and meh!
...But ... As soon I started to composite every layer ; the 3D , the cellshaded/inked character (even unfinished, only flat color zone) ; I started to not like the result. Maybe it felts a bit too much as a result of those anime studios, or animation in general ( too industrial? ) and I couldn't find my 'style' in it anymore.
Starting again, from scratch... pencil style
It was hard to admit all this work was a fail, but less difficult because it was only affecting the page one. It was wise to start on the page one alone, and not pencil+ink all the pages this way. So, time to start over, and this time I decided to just pencil everything with my new presets 'charcoal pencils'. This way, I'm using the 3D only as a guideline and I can do cross-hatching modeling. It's a way to draw I feel very comfortable to do, and I like the rendering ; but it's always difficult to color it.
After the first pass of colors, I could compare. I understand the two looks good ; but the one on right feel a bit more warm, and made by a 'human'. It add life in it.
The workflow this time is even simplier and in three major steps:
- Pencil work detailed with background and start of shading with crosshatching, charcoal style.
- Flatting color with a brush, because all algorithm are just lost with this 'noise' and texture. That's really unfortunate for all my work and involvement on all the method I tested and gave feedback for auto-coloring on computer.
- Shading the colors, but not so much to let the lines 'breath' and have them still convey the information. I also add little stroke of white on the top.
At real pixel size, the texture is really good. I also started research for brushes in Krita to simulate water stain of watercolors. You can see a bit the effect on Pepper's hat and on the background of this close-up :
I was confident enough with this style to try something else: blending another artwork in my artwork. 3D into 2D and 2D into 2D, this is the geek part in me liking recursive things. The poster represents the new floating arena of Komona for an invitation. I used the interactive mirror in Krita and my 'ink' brush preset for it ; a way to use this 'inking' research I made and not feel it's 100% time lost... :-)
A first rendering
And here is the page one; after my test and with the Inkscape text ( in French ) on top.
( Note: the top panel is not colored, it's work-in-progress! )
Comparisons ( again )
I'm happy because I found a way to find-back an improved version of the style I had at "episode 11: The witches of Chaosah" but this time with solving big workflow breaker. On episode 11 ( you can check the making-of here ), my presets and skill with Krita wasn't enough 'good' to get a good pencil rendering. Going full digital with a better rendering is a good improvement for the flexibility and the precision of drawing.
Here is a large image version to do comparison: with the first test with on left ; and newer on right.
( Note; on the first one, I stopped halfway as soon as I started to feel uncomfortable with it; that's why mirror has no reflection, not a lot of shading and many 'flat zone', etc... ).
... and a close-up to compare the texture:
On the way to 'pencil' all!...
So, all in all, now I know the way and I'll draw all the story with this advanced penciling technique during next week. When I'll have all the story done this way ; the translation team will be able to start the translation effort while I'll do the color pass. This penciling pass will certainly take me time, because all backgrounds, details are involved ; but this time invested at the drawing step makes coloring 2 time faster. So, all in all, I'm not loosing a lot on productivity, it's not a shortcut to make the production faster either.
Third update: Inside productionLast update I ended with a 'Let's pencil all' and with a stylistic research done. I was pretty exited about it but after a couple of day penciling I hit a problem: I didn't really liked the result of the test ; they felt a bit too grainy, noisy and coloring more this way felt has being trapped to paint "under the drawing" layer. So, I tested how it could look if I was adding a bit of smoothing over the pencil layer and if I started to paint-over. And I felt better about it.
Comparison: first test on left, second 'penciled' on center , and third with smooth and paint-over.
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The purpose of the style research wasn't to find a 'new style' for the sake of changing for changing ; but to find a style where I can be more productive. I wanted to speed-up the slow production of the episode. I conclude now it's a bit impossible: I like the painted rendering and sure it takes time. Let's accept it, and move on! This way I could end my test first page, here is a preview:
1. Grey violet (left on the illustration under)
I paint with a grey-violet brush directly on a white background. This grey-violet bright color ; #b8a2a6 is just a personal preference to keep working with compressed bright value. This way, I'm not really tempted to do complex gradient ( not a lot of 'room' in the value for this ), and the panels were all sufficiently detailed to make a first rendering of all the episode this way. Certainly not ideal, but it was working in practice and took not so long to complete all the episode this way and get something I feel good for the facial expression, poses and design. I also appreciated to can shade a bit, and add values here and there.
2. Pre-color (center on the illustration under)
With the violet artwork in multiply blending mode on the top, I'm adding the color under. I build up the palette this way. I like to keep this top-layer in low contrast. It helps me to focus on the contrast done by the color. When it's done, I contrast progressively the grey-violet top lines ; to retrieve the expression the lines, and a bit more contrast.
3. Final details ( right on the illustration under)
I flatten all the layers of lines and colors to a single layer, and I paint over details: textures, little rim lights, sharp edges. After hours of detailing this way, I start to feel that new painting strokes starts to destroy the result ; that's my only indicator to know when I should stop to add more details. So, detailing is a long process, but for sure one who ensure a certain level of quality. This level of rendering always make me more happy and I feel better about my work this way. So, when I was looking for a productive style, I was missing the true target : I probably should start targeting an artistic style that make me more happy, without consideration of time and production cost. Speed will come with time, experience and mastery ... or not! :-)
Right now as I'm writing this lines, I'm still detailing panel after panel, days after days. Release will happen next week, when all will be ready!
This article will be visible publicly one week after the release and then I'll start another article about the next episode. Let me know if you liked this update, if you have ideas of improvements, etc...